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in Semarang is really nice and amazing. First of all, Semarang has many great tourism places, such
as Marina Beach, Kali Pancur Waterfall and Maron Beach. In Marina beach, you can swim and enjoy travelling by boat across the sea. In addition, all of them have great view
of nature. The tourists can enjoy the beautiful waterfall in Kali Puncur. Next, there are so many culinary places with many great food that can be visited and tasted in Semarang. Waroeng Semawis provides many kind of food, such as chicken noodle, lunpia, and chinese steamed bun. Waroeng Kuna-Kuni serves both of them, such as gado-gado, chicken with honey sauce, and shrimp fried rice. Furthermore, Semarang has many historical
monuments that can be visited. Tugu Muda as a historical monuments is really famous in there. Moreover, The tourists can learn and enjoy the history of
Semarang City. They can go to the Museum Ronggowarsito to learn about it.
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Hi Jeje, I think your explanation about your topic sentence are very clear. You also use transitional words, so I can understand how nice and amazing semarang is. hehe :)
BalasHapusThank you for the comment and compliment that you give to me, Hulda. Why don't you try to visit Semarang for once? It is really great, Hulda.
HapusJeremy, I can see you are stating your topic sentence clearly. also, you put some transitional words to make a flow in your paragraph. I like it! What is Maron Beach? I never about it. Is that a new beach?
BalasHapusThanks for the comment and compliment, Prim. I don't know about the Maron beach either, Prim. But, I ever heard it from my friends and I search in the internet too about it. And I think it is a good one to beside the Marina beach.
HapusHi Je, I think your Semarang is a big country than Salatiga.
BalasHapusyou paragraph is so clear.
thank you........
Jason, better to use "we" rather than the toursit :-)
BalasHapusI wish you all the best!