Hello, my beloved friends and lecturers. First, let me introduce myself. My name is Jeremy Jason Kristian Sutrisno. You can call me Jeje as a friendly call. I'am sorry if I'am a bit formal in greeting someone because I like to give a warm greeting, so I can be a friend with you all and I think that way is the appropriate way in being polite with people. I'am 19 years old. Right now, I'am studying at Satya Wacana Christian University, and I'am a college student at Faculty of Language and Art. I like to study language especially English language. Since child, I like to hear many English language songs from many different country. Somehow, I became interested in English language and that's why I liked English from that moment. So, I decided to take English education program in this SWCU. That's a little about me.
In this faculty, I learned about writing, listening, speaking, and reading. I had my writing class three times, they were Creative Writing, Narrative Writing, and Procedural Writing. While went through the classes, I had many challenges that i had to face. For the first, I'am worried about my grammar in writing some sentences because I'am not good at my grammar's skill. I'am afraid that some of my friends and my lecturers didn't understand my writing at all. And then, I had a problem to in writing a good essay or paragraph. I just didn't know the structure of the paragraph. Also I had a difficulties in summarizing some articles. I think the most difficult problem that I still had until now is the grammar problem.
My expectations in learning in this class are that I hope I can improve my grammar's skill in writing articles, and I hope that I can learn more to cover my problems in my writing's skill. But, i really hope that I can learn so many theory or some practical things in writing's lesson. Not just about grammar, but the new things that will be taught in this semester. Hopefully, my writing's skill will greatly increased. Thank you, everyone.
1. Suggestion : Hi, Jeje. we have same problems. they are not easy right ? but we should pass the class hehe. I advice you to do some exercises at home. I think you can be more confident about Grammar. It will not very difficult if you have many/much vocabulary in your brain. some lecturers advice me like that.
BalasHapus2. The positive encouragement : wow.. that is a good expectation,je. :) . keep fighting, Je. I think you can do it. keep practicing your Grammar ..
3. The language form : "For the first, I'am worried about my grammar in writing some sentences because I'am not good at my grammar's skill. I'am afraid that some of my friends and my lecturers didn't understand my writing at all." je, please choose the right tenses that is used. the last one is "I had a problem to in writing a good essay or paragraph." please check the form again :)
thank you :)
Thank you very much for the comments, Hulda. I hope we can be successful in the future and I wish that we can overcome our challenges too.
Hapus1. Hello, Jeje or should I call you Infinite Justice's Pilot? Haha, just kidding. I just read your blog post and you are super duper polite and it is good. For your writing problems, I guess it is everybody's problem. The grammar problem can be solved by doing this standard advice but magically works which is a lot of practice. Don't be afraid to write, if they don't understand they will ask you and you will have time to revised your work.
BalasHapus2. You have great expectation on this course, and the only way to fulfill your expectation is through a lot of writing practices. Write something easy for the first time like your status in Facebook or in other social media. Ask your friends to check your grammar.
3. I'am afraid that some of my friends and my lecturers didn't understand my writing at all.
"Helo je, I think it supposed to be I am or I'm"
i really hope that I can learn so many theory or some practical things in writing's lesson.
" 'I' should be capitalized"
Jason Zala, Justice Gundam, launching!! Haha. I like that, Prim. Thanks a lot for your suggestions and your comments for me. It really encourage me writing some article. Thank you.
HapusGreetings to you Jason!
HapusOne suggestion for me is you need to avoid writing a "too long" sentence:
* I had my writing class three times, they were Creative Writing, Narrative Writing, and Procedural Writing.
(Also please check the meaning of three times)
Please re-write that into two different sentences.
Jason, keep practicing and doing your best!
Thank you, Mr. Calvin for the correction and encouragement that you gave to me. I will do my best in learning all about writing, Mister. God Bless You always, Mister Calvin.
Hapushallo Jee, sorry for my late comment..
BalasHapus1. I am so happy to read your post, it so long than me hahahaa..
I think your problem it same with me, I am not good with grammar. But I believe if we always try to do the best, God will help us.
2. You have a expectation, I hope you can improve your grammar in this class. God bless you Je
3. I think you must put a comma before "I can improve my grammar's skill"
Thank you Jessyka for the suggestion and encouragement that you gave to me. I will do my best in learning. And thank you for the correction, too. God Bless You, Jessyka.
Hapus