Minggu, 06 September 2015

Creative Writing First Poem Jeremy Jason

My Mother



           Mother....
            You always love me
            You raised me with so many love and lessons
            You always give me what I need
                                              Mother....
                                              You always be in there when I need you
                                              Caring me like I was your only son
                                              Even I made mistakes, you still teach me a lesson
                                              so I can be a great man in the future


        Mother.....
        Carrying your burden from God to raised me is so hard
        I can never imagine that burden you carry on
        How I can payed all of your love and care to me
                           Mother.....
                           You are so amazing
                           I love you so much
                           I will make you proud of me
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32 komentar:

  1. Yustinus Calvin7 September 2015 pukul 23.16

    Hope you always love your Mom :-)
    don't forget to call her everyday
    Thanks JJ

    BalasHapus
  2. Unknown9 September 2015 pukul 01.12

    Always remember all advise from you mom, JJ
    :)

    BalasHapus
  3. Anonim9 September 2015 pukul 01.28

    Do the best for your mom je :)

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 08.28

      Thank you Wulan, do the best for your mother too Wulan, God Bless You

      Hapus
  4. Arlien Deyanda9 September 2015 pukul 03.37

    Good poem jeje :) i like it :)

    BalasHapus
  5. Moses Rollo9 September 2015 pukul 04.15

    Nice poem JJ .. i like it .. make the best for your mother.. :)

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 08.29

      Thank you Moses, do the best for your mother too Moses, God Bless You

      Hapus
  6. Mega Kharisma9 September 2015 pukul 04.56

    the sweetest poem ever! I can see how much you love your mom and it's so touching srsly. don't forget your promise to make your mom proud of you :D

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 08.31

      Thank you Mega, I will make it happen and wish the best for you and your mother too Mega :-), God Bless You

      Hapus
  7. mayanika indah9 September 2015 pukul 06.09

    Nice poem jeje
    Do the best for your mother and don't forget to always pray for your mother

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 08.54

      Thank you Maya, do the best for your mother too Maya, God Bless You

      Hapus
  8. Anonim9 September 2015 pukul 06.45

    I love you poem jeje.
    It's very deep. :-)

    BalasHapus
  9. Regina Particya Manihuruk9 September 2015 pukul 07.14

    Nice poem jeje, don't forget to call her everyday:)

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 09.00

      Thank you Regina, do the best for your mother too Regina, God Bless You

      Hapus
  10. Unknown9 September 2015 pukul 18.14

    Oh my god. Beautiful poem. I am missing my mom now huhu

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 09.03

      Be strong and patient Yolana, I'll wish you can meet your mom as soon as possible, Thank you and God Bless You and Your Mother

      Hapus
  11. Ajeng Retnaning Palupi9 September 2015 pukul 21.02

    JJ your poem is good. :')
    better you show this poem to your Mama~
    im sure she will give you more much money B-j
    Good luck yeah~ (9'<')9

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 08.59

      I already show it Poppy, and My mother said: " Ouw, my little fatty boy"
      Thank you Poppy, God Bless You

      Hapus
    2. Ajeng Retnaning Palupi12 September 2015 pukul 09.42

      then you get much more money from your mother?
      -w-)/

      Hapus
  12. Unknown10 September 2015 pukul 05.07

    always loving you mom JJ.. and I am missing my mom evertime :')

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 09.01

      Thank you Natalia,be patient Nat, I'll hope you will meet her soon as possible
      God Bless You and Your Mother

      Hapus
  13. Galuh Widyastuti10 September 2015 pukul 07.24

    I can feel that you two are so close to each other :") keep pray for her health, J. By the way, your mom is a beautiful lady :)

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 09.09

      Thank you Galuh, keep pray for you mother too, hope your mother always fine
      God Bless You and Your Mother

      Hapus
  14. Unknown11 September 2015 pukul 08.10

    i like your poem JJ. it's very deep and amazing .

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    1. Unknown12 September 2015 pukul 09.13

      Thank You Kharisma, hope the best for your mother
      God Bless You and Your Mother

      Hapus
  15. Unknown13 September 2015 pukul 03.41

    really love your poem Je..
    hope your mother have a longlife..
    God bless you and your family Je..

    BalasHapus
  16. It's V13 September 2015 pukul 05.17

    Your mother is beautiful, dont ever hurt her feeling Jeje, and say something beautiful to her sometimes...

    BalasHapus
  17. Yustinus Calvin15 September 2015 pukul 23.04

    Have a nice discussion with your friends :-)

    BalasHapus

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